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Unsupportive Mom (Thriller Story) Fiction, Part 1

Updated: Aug 11, 2022

All moms are different for example religious, greedy, unsupportive, ungrateful, kind, grateful, good, proud, and more...

But here we are talking about an unsupportive mom. There's a 14-year-old girl named Debbie who wants to become an artist but her mom and brother made fun of her job saying that 'You will become a waitress, maid'. Her mom and brother Adrian irritate her so much that she literally wants to emancipate herself when she will be 18. Her mom hits her over small things and big things. Especially when Debbie's mom expands from small argument to big argument. In fact, her mom hits Debbie more than Adrian. When Debbie has gotten 90% in Grade 8. Her mother was proud of her at first then she changes her mood a few days later. Debbie was literally fed up with her. Sometimes Debbie wishes her to die now. She can't tolerate her ungratefulness. Adrian left for medical school in the morning. When her mother was preparing breakfast for Debbie. When she started to finish her breakfast and put it back in the kitchen but unfortunately the cup broke on the floor by an accident. Her mom again beat her with at least 5 slaps. Debbie fell down on the floor next to broken tea. Debbie can't tolerate her mom anymore in anger mood.



So she picked up a piece of a broken cup while her mom was bringing a handkerchief to pick up the broken pieces of the cup. Then she stood up from the floor and rushed to her mom. Mom exasperatedly said, "NOW WHAT". Meanwhile, she shouted at Debbie she started to stab her belly using the broken pieces. And the blood was seeping out of her belly then she started to fall down on the floor. "Why... did you sta..h..b m..mm" inquired her mom in a suffocating way, especially her last words, and then died. Debbie had no regrets about stabbing her. She can handle her body as she was taller than her mom and in her house, she had a lot of blankets and sheets. So she spread the sheet all over the floor next to her mother. Then she rolled her mom's body on the sheet and then tied the sheet. And threw her over the lake which was almost near to her house. Luckily there were no people over there. And then Debbie reached her home and started to clean up the shreds of evidence and the mom's blood on the floor as well. When she was done cleaning up. She started to make her own alibi that she was at her home. Well, Debbie was more of a computer person who she knows little programming which she can enable the time on things she was working for a long time and then slept on the bed for 2 hrs as an alibi. When Adrian reached early due to the situation at medical school. Adrian walked up the stairs and went through his room. Adrian called her mom to tell her the news and continuously called her until he felt suspicious. He opened Debbie's door without knocking and rushed to her. Debbie was pretending to sleep and her brother woke her up in a worrying way. Adrian said worriedly, "Where's my mom". "I DON'T KNOW BESIDE I WAS DOING WORK THEN SLEPT", shouted Debbie.


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